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Glass
Contributed by
M
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Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
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I can't stop staring at this beautiful edge infront of me,
A sharp peice of glass
And i am the genius behind my having it,
I masterminded the glass to smash:
I 'carelessly' threw my arm out to hit it,
I was the one, the genius
to quickly slip the largest piece into my left pocket.
I deserve a prize for this act.
And now its beauty has pulled me into a whole new world.
I'm high on bloods delight
And i've no plans to come down for a while,
Addicted to this pain, this drug.
I've lost control,
I've lost my sanity
I left it behind
When they ruined my life.
And now i sit at this desk,
Captured by the beauty that lies motionless next to me.
A glistening piece of glass,
So innocent, powerless to most,
To me, a weapon i can use to inflict pain upon myself.
God threw me a falling star,
He knew what i would do with it,
How could i disappoint him?
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M
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2003-04-24 17:35:00]
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Re: Glass
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:31:13 PM AEST
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| excellent poem... but one thought if this is about you... please don't... keep writing it out... we need every single one of us here... blessings... |
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Re: Glass
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 03:13:23 AM AEST
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Emily very good poem very sad topic. Be strong and try not to good. I don't agree with the last 3 lines, but that's ok. A very well written, clear poem. Like the previous commented suggested I think u should write it out.
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Re: Glass
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 11:47:28 PM AEST
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Pain how it rules ones life.
Seems there is so much pain in this poem,
I wonder is it you that hurts or are just really good with portraying emotional poetry?
Really well done either way, you are good at writing, keep it up. |
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