|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
No solace.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 04:38:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
|
Stumbling, fumbling through,
Enlightened state,
Grasping at nothing,
It's all at stake,
Token, spoken words,
Blurt and rebound,
Soul hardens,
Reply to their sound,
Wonder, ponder thoughts,
Spurn and allow,
Foul portents,
Gracious and loud,
Willful, skillful and proud,
Clear and honest,
Scowl and grimace,
No solace is found.
Copyright ©
huwbeauty
... [
2011-03-03 16:38:53]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: No solace.
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 05:58:58 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very creative artistic write.
Blessings,
emy |
|
|
Re: No solace.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 09:13:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Vey good. It is good to be up front about situations. |
|
|
Re: No solace.
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Saturday, 5th March 2011 @ 12:07:58 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Blurt and rebound soul hardens.......you feel like you want to bring all the words under control and bring meaning that will soothe and quieten the water until there is peace and a melting of the soul.Amongst the anguish there is harsh reality as expressed by the way you have written this as almost only when a breath is taken there is the clarity but not the picture that will bring peace that a troubled mind needs to find.Great use of words and expression can feel the anguish and as a person I want to answer it. |
|
|
Re: No solace.
(User Rating: 1 )
by xnickix7 on
Monday, 14th March 2011 @ 08:45:26 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Very beautifully written. I can really feel the emotion in this poem; |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
