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Life
Contributed by
Dagman
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 12:39:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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What is the life? it's full of scare...
We have to fight, everywhere,
To get some things and benefits,
Live our lifes and satisfy intentions.
Life means a wonderfull period, but in fact
We living with downhead restrictions
An obsticles that we could jump throught
Before we change the thinking method
Get up your head, go fast, think shiny
Don't let youself be missunderstood
Find forces that could brake this fear
And go with clear mind to toward.
Copyright ©
Dagman
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2011-03-02 12:39:11]
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Re: Life
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by DrcGaimer on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 03:12:06 PM AEST
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| think shiny....don't let yourself be misunderstood. Love it. |
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Re: Life
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by Zeberdee on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 04:32:05 PM AEST
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| The bad spelling and grammar sadly took away some of your poem's quality. But not a bad message. |
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Re: Life
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by Deadson on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 10:50:07 PM AEST
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| you have great style.. Mistakes need a place in perfection.. Never quit writing.. |
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Re: Life
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by Mando on
Friday, 4th March 2011 @ 06:30:55 PM AEST
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| great poem . make me wonder what is life. |
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