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Portals
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 10:48:35 AM in AEST
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Portals to nowhere
Through crystal falls
Blackened through years
Of neglected walls
Once was filled with hope
A child’s imagination
Colors so brilliant
Joy and jubilation
The worlds collided
The damage done
No victory here
No one won
Along came a spider
Unusually marked
Web like silk
On fence near the park
Unique it catches
The magic within
Bringing back
That lost by sin
Once more wonder
Awe inspired joy
Portals now open
Back is the little boy
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2011-03-02 10:48:35]
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Re: Portals
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by MayGrace on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 11:43:26 AM AEST
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| Wow, thats very impressive. I really liked that a lot! Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Portals
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 01:33:12 PM AEST
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OOOO I love this one sis.
Hugs
Michelle
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Re: Portals
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 09:30:27 PM AEST
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Incredible writing.
More please?
Smiles,
emy |
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Re: Portals
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by vivacious on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 03:14:32 PM AEST
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| very much enjoyed this. views into a child's mind are always interesting. |
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Re: Portals
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 24th May 2014 @ 12:49:45 PM AEST
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i find myself getting lost in this poem, it is
beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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