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21 years
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 05:10:45 AM in AEST
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21 years
I can’t believe it was so long ago
21 years have passed
I still have you in my heart
I still have you in my thoughts
I was just a youngster, 20, myself
I was so unprepared for you passing
I thought we’d have more time
But we only had 17 years
You where my father for only 17 years
I can see your face whilst I write
I can feel your presence
You’re smiling
Dad, I miss you
By GDW, banjosandwitch 02/03/11 for my father LMW
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Re: 21 years
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by DrcGaimer on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 03:07:10 PM AEST
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| Very moving, I got a little misty eyed. From your writing it seems you and your dad were very close. Nice tribute |
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Re: 21 years
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 08:12:01 PM AEST
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Very, very touching.
Great writing.
blessings,
emy |
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