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Silent Whispers
Contributed by
lonoto7
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Tuesday, 1st March 2011 @ 07:58:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Silent whispers speak to me
Silent whispers make me bleed
Thinking only of your voice
Silent whispers take its place
Knowing only that you’re gone
Silent whispers carry on
Wishing I could see you more
Silent whispers on and on
Hating myself even more
Silent whispers more and more
See blood shining on the floor
Silent whispers speak no more
Copyright ©
lonoto7
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2011-03-01 19:58:20]
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Re: Silent Whispers
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 05:07:52 AM AEST
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| This reminds me of a poem I wrote called "whisper of death's love." It really does feel like a silent whisper is talking to you trying to make you remember the things you are trying to forget. |
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Re: Silent Whispers
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 01:34:34 PM AEST
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I loved the manner in which this is written.
It carries itself and reads well.
Sad in message though.
Hugs N Peace
Michelle |
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