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OUR EMBRACE
Contributed by
DrcGaimer
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Monday, 28th February 2011 @ 11:26:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A lazy Sunday, as we recline.
Music in the background, your hands clasped in mine.
My arms about your waist, your back upon my chest.
The fragrance of your hair rises, as beneath my chin your head rest.
Occasional eye contact, accompanied with a smile, no words we speak.
Comfortable, in our embrace, as we slowly fall asleep.
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DrcGaimer
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2011-02-28 11:26:27]
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Re: OUR EMBRACE
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by poeticjestix on
Monday, 28th February 2011 @ 12:18:28 PM AEST
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| I like the fragrance of hair thing. Don't really think about it too much but it is a strange contented pleasure- unless she has extreme dandruff or other hygiene problems- hence the need to sit outside! |
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Re: OUR EMBRACE
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 12:13:40 AM AEST
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| Love it! |
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Re: OUR EMBRACE
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 04:37:44 AM AEST
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| cool poem, the perfect way to spend a sunday. |
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Re: OUR EMBRACE
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by Banjosandwitch on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 05:13:11 AM AEST
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| OMG loved this short and sweet |
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Re: OUR EMBRACE
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by Rasberry on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 09:29:27 AM AEST
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| U described dat wndrfl moment prfctly! |
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Re: OUR EMBRACE
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 3rd March 2011 @ 12:21:59 AM AEST
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| Perfect moments needing no words, complete! |
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