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Contributed by Rhei76 on Monday, 28th February 2011 @ 08:28:07 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

tag me, tear me, love me, hate me, leave me- i'm gone

take it, all of me- you see that me- well he, he died

no words left, not even the strength to push out on more breath

he died in the ruins of your murderess tongue
delicate, he found happiness in what's come undone
now to lay to rest, to strip the hate and anger
he welcomes the dirt to take away the danger

he layed down to rest
and now you see the real me
i ain't going ta take it
push me again
i'll show you who's best

come on!- the me that you knew
well you knocked him down
and i suffocated him
that little ****** was taking to much from you

he was killing me with his hurt from you
he had to die because of you
now you better keep your distance
better shut that mouth and walk away

Don't tell me you love me- hate me, you wanna **** me

what was once damaged goods
is now just no good

so leave me where i lie
you'll get no remorse from the one who already died
so go- can't you see i'm already gone

Copyright © Rhei76 ... [ 2011-02-28 08:28:07]
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Re: over (User Rating: 1 )
by Mando on Friday, 4th March 2011 @ 09:29:57 AM AEST
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Strong powerful, gives hope to the weak this is very good material.

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