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Standing Sore
Contributed by
exiled
on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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(Standing Sore)
Why,
do you segragate this.
Don't,
try to be the
One,
person who pretends
To,
have ever loved me
I,
have already
Gone,
into this place.
staying away from what I am
I cannot anymore
keep looking out that door
why do I keep being
left behind feeling so sore
You,
could never be this
Why,
can't you believe this
I,
was always
There,
for you
When,
you needed somone
To,
cling on to
For,
all that you went through.
I stand before you in a clipped out memory
showing you how I was used
how I never came to be
showing you all of me.
Why,
do you segragate this
Don't,
try to be the
One,
person who pretends
To,
have ever loved me
I,
have already
Gone,
into this place.
and you left me standing sore
like no other before
I cannot love anymore, anymore
I cannot take this anymore
take this anymore
being left standing sore
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2003-04-24 13:35:00]
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Re: Standing Sore
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 09:06:06 AM AEST
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| i like this, and the end carries a strong tune, too, excellent title, hugs nessa |
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Re: Standing Sore
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by AngryPrincess on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 01:27:21 AM AEST
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wow sam, that is really excellent...really...i love how you structured it...great write
Lindsey |
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