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I'll write for you tomorrow. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Saturday, 26th February 2011 @ 08:58:21 AM in AEST
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ambiguous
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I'll write for you tomorrow. . .
limbs outstretched
tulip touching
pale & simple
wrists upturned
bruised & biased
I am un. . .
able to express
but shed gently
this scrutiny. . . because
because
your language is too painful
for my understanding
is scribbling
13 questions
whose answers
are all the same. . .
I am sick
Copyright ©
elle
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2011-02-26 08:58:21]
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Re: I'll write for you tomorrow. . .
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th February 2011 @ 10:43:26 PM AEST
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Quite honestly, I haven't a clue (or maybe a tad) what you're writing about but I just know a very sad feeling comes over me as I read it and as always, your imagery and use of words is damn inspiring.
It is now tomorrow...  |
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Re: I'll write for you tomorrow. . .
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by Breezy on
Sunday, 27th February 2011 @ 04:29:35 AM AEST
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elle, the emotions your poetry conjures are unbelievable.
It's truly amazing, how you are able to take the hand of the
deepest feelings and force them into the light. Your writing
is honest and wonderfully real. Well done, poet. Well done.
~ Breezy
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Re: I'll write for you tomorrow. . .
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by lonelyguy92 on
Monday, 28th February 2011 @ 12:06:52 PM AEST
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| A very nice poem |
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Re: I'll write for you tomorrow. . .
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by poeticjestix on
Monday, 28th February 2011 @ 12:32:55 PM AEST
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intriguing. Like a half burnt scroll. There's something there but it's hidden too deep and I've lost my spade.
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Re: I'll write for you tomorrow. . .
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by JAlexandra on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 08:41:36 PM AEST
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| Clever! enjoyed reading |
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Re: I'll write for you tomorrow. . .
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by Frillycakes on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 06:51:30 AM AEST
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This is why enjoy poetry!
Frillycakes |
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