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ersatz razorblade
Contributed by
elle
on
Saturday, 26th February 2011 @ 08:39:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I dreamed in a dream
that I was dreaming. . .
streaming. . .
falling down. . .
erratically
I awoke
& glad
thankful I'd not fallen
until. . .
bleeding mercury
I really awoke. . . finally
crying then. . .
finally. . .
alone with myself & the pieces
of what could be considered an alternate reality
a narrative of self
complicated by the emphasis of others
. . . not easy to face
or compilate
oh, to bleed mercury. . .
to coalesce. . .
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2011-02-26 08:39:43]
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Re: ersatz razorblade
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th February 2011 @ 10:11:44 PM AEST
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1. Okay, like wow!!!! Have you been watching Fringe or sumthin?
2. Scary!!! |
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Re: ersatz razorblade
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by ming on
Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 08:44:03 AM AEST
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And if the blade is a metaphor is it no more real!? Red red blood? Pain. Read pain. Dreams in dreams in dreams! LOVE IT!
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