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Pointless

Contributed by tmanyeahz on Friday, 25th February 2011 @ 09:21:22 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Invisible.

Continuing on as a shadow, a rarely noticed silhouette lingering on the rooftop of life.
Looking down upon what used to be, what is just.
We cut because of you, your repercussions and meaningful words.
Our wraith is brought upon the undeserving because of your cowardliness.

They die, we suffer, and damn ourselves to death.
We hang our heads, and mouth the words of whats to come.
We cry and cut until were in a state of exhaustion, a forced but needed sleep.
Walking upon this earth, feeling undeserving, and unwilling.

Your ignorance is a constant reminder of why were like this.
The sarcastic tone and the innocent like stare.
Unfortunately for you we aren't that gullible.
We see through your lies and unbounded ambition to further pain us

We wish death upon you and plan it precisely.
We imagine bad things happening to you. Sick dark things that are indescribably horrific.
This will be the last time you put another innocent person in such a state of mind.
Or so thought.

Prosperous for you, we've been blinded by your cruel, insane words.
Its too late for sympathy.
My unnoticed self took a not so unnoticeable dive off my rooftop today.
Its not as bad as it sounds though.

For the first time in a while I feel joy.
It warms my shrill heart to know whats happening in your world now.
Because I'm dead
And you've only your self to blame.

If you can live with that, this was pointless.
Just as life its self

Copyright © tmanyeahz ... [ 2011-02-25 21:21:22]
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Re: Pointless (User Rating: 1 )
by JustAnotherTeenageFool on Saturday, 26th February 2011 @ 12:10:36 AM AEST
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*applause*
This piece is one of the best I have ever seen.
EXCELLENT vocabulary.
It really painted a picture in my head.. I could feel it.
That is the beauty of sorrow; It is a strong emotion,
and art like this is fueled by emotion.

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