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Roses
Contributed by
kmkzbubbles
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Thursday, 24th February 2011 @ 10:38:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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To truly admire a rose
It must be judged in its entirety
Just to judge the flower
Upon the immaculate beauty of the petals
The sweetness of its intoxicating aroma
Or its soft velvety touch as it brushes across skin
Would do the rose an injustice from not loving it as a whole
The rose has many other parts that are many times looked over,
The hundreds of sharp thorns designed to intimidate
Or the dirty entangled roots that have allowed the flower to grow and flourish
Most people remove the thorns and roots to reveal a fake image of perfection
But only once a person can find beauty in flaws can a rose be truly admired and loved.
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kmkzbubbles
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2011-02-24 22:38:25]
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Re: Roses
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th February 2011 @ 10:42:04 PM AEST
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This is beautiful just like the rose.
Welcome to YPDC.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Roses
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by Banjosandwitch on
Friday, 25th February 2011 @ 04:42:50 AM AEST
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| i have a friend called rose she'd like your poem |
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Re: Roses
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 26th February 2011 @ 07:25:30 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write...... to emphasise the reality of love and the acceptance of imperfection. The challenge in the first line leading to the wisdom contained in the conclusion, what a lovely piece of insight. |
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