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Click Refresh
Contributed by
duff
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Thursday, 24th February 2011 @ 02:07:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Satellite minds launch ideas from unknown locations
To a network waiting to reconnect the social scene
Until now there hasn’t been such an interest in
The daily continuum or public friend requests
Profiles are splattered with moody blues and the
Never wavering support of those iconic smiley faces
Looming inside a technological based world where new
Creations last the amount of time it takes to click refresh
Users make up the daunting numbers that are
Consistently pushing the latest online addiction
Signing in with a buddy list the size of a small
Village conveys a reality that times have evolved and
As long as these internet astronauts continue their
Exploration into a futuristic market for consumer gain
The global party can proceed to check their inbox
Copyright ©
duff
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2011-02-24 14:07:33]
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Re: Click Refresh
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th February 2011 @ 11:28:46 PM AEST
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I really like this.
In a related story, I got a friend request today from someone I don't know and never heard of.
Hey, but, Kristen Tallent is on my friends list and I lived for that day to arrive. ;-)
Just some trivial crap there that seems to relate to your very well stated poem.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Click Refresh
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 25th February 2011 @ 02:27:56 AM AEST
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Hi Duff
A really well penned effort. You sum up our current global society perfectly. Thanks for posting. |
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Re: Click Refresh
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 25th February 2011 @ 02:33:10 AM AEST
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Hi Duff,
Good stuff here, have missed your writing,with your unique style and interesting take on the world.
This reminds me so much of my kids who are always on facebook or msn and bragging about how many friends they have!
Mat. |
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Re: Click Refresh
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by lonelyguy92 on
Friday, 4th March 2011 @ 05:17:41 AM AEST
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| Great poem enjoyed it very much =) |
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Re: Click Refresh
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 12:31:27 AM AEST
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perfection...............
hugs n' love nessa
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