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Emotion
Contributed by
Zainne100
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Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 09:42:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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When will my troubles pass?
I cant seem to find a cure
Sadness has filled me up
The rain has come again
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Zainne100
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2011-02-22 21:42:30]
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Re: Emotion
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 08:44:53 AM AEST
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I think we have all felt this way before. I hope you find your "cure" soon.
Great poem. Short and strong! |
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Re: Emotion
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by RachelSixx on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 03:59:55 PM AEST
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| very powerful poem. the emotion really comes through. great job! |
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Re: Emotion
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 10:20:54 PM AEST
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You bottle your emotions to the point they run,
Whist I do more than that to say the least,
I store them in a sort-of pit, a makeshift sun.
The very ripples of the drips are in turn a crease.
A never-ending folding of emotion,
Compressing into dark-matter.
Forever building, and Forever gaining,
Slowly day by day, they Slowly get fatter.
I hope in one rotation, the sun starts raining. |
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Re: Emotion
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by JAlexandra on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 08:59:12 PM AEST
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| Short and to the point |
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