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frozen in time.
Contributed by
ABM
on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 06:38:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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happiness...
what?
what happiness?
she asks for you to smile pretty for the camera
theres nothing to smile for mom.
she asks what changed.
silence.
forgive me.
lips twitch.
white teeth, the aftermath of braces.
she smiles
shes happy.
your turn to be happy.
....
flash.
Copyright ©
ABM
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2011-02-22 18:38:22]
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Re: frozen in time.
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 06:55:25 PM AEST
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Fake it if only for a moment. Let the world be fooled into thinking you're happy
Very interesting write. Great piece |
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Re: frozen in time.
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by RachelSixx on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 04:06:10 PM AEST
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| very intriguing, i enjoyed it a lot. great job! |
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Re: frozen in time.
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2011 @ 08:52:46 PM AEST
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Your gift to write is really amazing.
Awesome work.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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