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simple
Contributed by
ABM
on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 06:09:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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as the pen flows, the nose stings
aggravation
irriation
too much
now for the eyes.
the faucet leaks
drip. drip...
you look weak.
fix the problem
sleeve to the face.
problem solved
for now.
words.
jumbled
mumbled.
stuttered
misunderstood.
so, i hide them
cant set em free
cant express...
myself
trying to understand this sadness
secrets behind closed doors.
no peeking
shut it tight
deadbolt it.
where are those chains, again?
tie me down.
now go.
Copyright ©
ABM
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2011-02-22 18:09:20]
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Re: simple
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 06:18:18 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
It's different but it makes perfect sense to me.
Blessings,
emy
Keep writing. |
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Re: simple
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by blended76 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 06:23:27 PM AEST
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| Usually when we just write what we feel at the exact moment without over analyzing it is usually our best work. Thanks for sharing....I really enjoyed it |
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Re: simple
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 07:00:16 PM AEST
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Came across great. I like the flow to this.
Welcome to ypdc keep posting! |
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Re: simple
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by RachelSixx on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 04:08:13 PM AEST
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| it makes perfect sense to me. i love the flow of it. it's very well written. great job! |
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