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If I said I love you
Contributed by
poeticjestix
on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 04:27:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I said I love you
would it really matter?
Those words are said too many times
they couldn't really shatter
defences round a heart
that has often suffered siege
falling for a scoundrel
temporarily in liege
well love it is a door
that slams or opens wide
our choices are sometimes perverse
influenced by pride
well I shall say I love you
and you can disagree
for in love I am a victim
as I bend down on one knee
and I don't care the answer
as long as you believe
that what you say is honest
as long as you do breath
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Re: If I said I love you
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 05:10:06 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. Great write! |
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Re: If I said I love you
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by polaris773 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 06:00:37 PM AEST
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| its very nice |
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Re: If I said I love you
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by RachelSixx on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 04:10:55 PM AEST
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| very nice, flows wonderfully. great job! |
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