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cold and dead
Contributed by
monkeylove
on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 12:21:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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one day youll find me cold and dead
ull scream my name
ull scar your face
ull wish i was here
ull see yourself cry
ull see my die
ull pray to the sky
ull sing that lalaby
ull lose all your pride
ull dive in all the lies
ull cry and cry
ull bang your head
ull cut you leg
ull smash your face
ull carve my name
ull always remember
ull never forget
ull die slowly
ull forever dread...
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2011-02-22 12:21:49]
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Re: cold and dead
(User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 08:35:12 AM AEST
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| Hope things get better, very strong poem your pain comes across well. |
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Re: cold and dead
(User Rating: 1 )
by RachelSixx on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 04:15:42 PM AEST
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| very strong, your emotion is very clear. great job. |
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