|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Solemn
Contributed by
Dirkj
on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 06:42:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
|
I Saw you this morning
I Felt so lonely
Seeing you looking so Brittle
So Tiny, so incredibly Sad
One embrace
One touch of your hand
One smell of your hair
If i could kiss - just once
The wetness in your eyes
Two solemn faces
Staring at each other
Copyright ©
Dirkj
... [
2011-02-22 06:42:43]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Solemn
(User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 10:09:53 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
There's a lot of sadness here. Another great write
The words have a delicate touch, well written |
|
|
Re: Solemn
(User Rating: 1 )
by poeticjestix on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 03:41:08 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| good |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
