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Freedom Waits.
Contributed by
cashfan1
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Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 02:37:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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At the bosom of the valley my freedom waits.
Through the gate I enter by the light of a solitary star,
Through sapling trees bent by an old wind,
Now dripping with the laughter of a new day,
I wander slowly as if tip toeing
Over the ribboned fragments of a dream.
I come upon a clearing
Where the half light enters the solitude.
The vastness of sky belittles my presence
And humbled by loneliness
I seek a peace deeper than the darkness.
Beyond the great peaks the horizon groans
Under the weight of winter-spring conflict
And begin to drain the valley of the last dregs of night.
Looking up I see the solitary star
Ushered away into oblivion.
I walk on through the stirring dawn until at last
I come upon the great emerald bosom of the valley.
And there, caressed by a soft breeze,
Serenaded by the hedgerow birds,
Embraced by the sleepy towering peaks,
I gratefully kneel at the bosom of my freedom.
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Re: Freedom Waits.
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 05:28:10 AM AEST
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Hi Dennis,
Another gem and unmistakingly hallmarked
by your unique style. You're a lucky man to be
surrounded by so much natural beauty, and
Nature is lucky to have you in observance.
Tommy
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Re: Freedom Waits.
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 10:36:19 AM AEST
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| nature really is awe inspiring. A beautiful poem. |
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Re: Freedom Waits.
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by duff on
Thursday, 24th February 2011 @ 10:50:54 AM AEST
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Beautifully done! Outstanding imagery that jumps off the page. What an uplifting and creative write that lets out a sigh. You have such a knack for capturing your surroundings and you bring the reader to your front door step each and every time. Great job my friend
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