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I'm So Scared Of You
Contributed by
Dirkj
on
Monday, 21st February 2011 @ 11:26:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'm Not scared of you
I'm Scared of your emotions
They look so familiar
And when familiar
Emotions clash
It's usually followed
By a big ball of fire
Ripping through
Our deepest secrets
Making us food
For public thought
So turn away
Take the other route
This one you're on
Is only going to cause
Bloodshed and tears
Bitterness , nothing sweet
We have touched
Once before
It was a sensual moment
A Moment of madness
Can madness
Have a romantic meaning
In our totally distorted worlds
I Want to remember
The softness in your eyes
The wetness i still remember
The fondness of my memories
Of the pictures
I Hold so dear
I'm so scared - Of you
And my emotions
I'm Scared of your every touch
My fears are spiraling
Out of control
Please , Please, Don't Touch
Copyright ©
Dirkj
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2011-02-21 23:26:13]
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Re: I'm So Scared Of You
(User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 05:12:02 AM AEST
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Very nice. I like the flow to this. It seems like there is longing layered over confusion in your words, very deep and thought provoking.
"Can madness
Have a romantic meaning
In our totally distorted worlds"
I really like these lines in particular, struck up some thoughts in my head. Nicely done |
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Re: I'm So Scared Of You
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 10:38:10 AM AEST
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| Just try it. Don't look back. No regrets. (unless of course you are already in a relationship) |
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