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A compulsion unfulfilled.
Contributed by
CommasCanSeperate
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Monday, 21st February 2011 @ 01:05:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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One more second minute hour
it’s all the same
I don’t understand
The passion for a game
I know I said yes..
I said I didn’t mind
I was trying it all backwards
yet trying to be kind
But you see I don’t fully understand
I never really will
How some piece of electronic *****
Can pour and fulfil
It not real can’t you see that
Can you see that I am
I’m not like you, I’m sorry
That I don’t understand
I crave for your – anything
I want your attention
I want to be desired
I want to own that compulsion
Why hold onto them why?
When you can cling to me
I’m breaking again
If only someone could see.
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2011-02-21 13:05:23]
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Re: A compulsion unfulfilled.
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by poeticjestix on
Monday, 21st February 2011 @ 01:39:12 PM AEST
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| breathless, anxious, insecure. well captured |
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Re: A compulsion unfulfilled.
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by Dirkj on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 07:01:15 AM AEST
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| wow , powerful stuff, was exhausted after reading it. It's good to let the anger out |
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