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Inessential Man
Contributed by
nirupam
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Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 11:09:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Nothing changes ever, essentially.
Blank pages lurk in an existential void,
Just as written pages remain pathetically filled-up,
Suffocated to numerous reading eyes.
No thing ever changes, essentially.
The long night grumbles in darkness.
A foggy morning delays the early air-traffic.
Come, change me, if you think you can.
Sincerely yours, an inessential man.
Copyright ©
nirupam
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2011-02-20 11:09:40]
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Re: Inessential Man
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 05:33:30 PM AEST
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Come, change me, if you think you can.
Sincerely yours, an inessential man.
Great write and the above lines really put it like it is and that's awesome.
Big blessings,
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Re: Inessential Man
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by Willofree on
Monday, 21st February 2011 @ 08:08:00 AM AEST
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i really injoyed y our poem, it caused me to think. Yes, change is illusive, but mustt come from within. What is our purpose in life seems to be the most meaningf ul existential quest sion, perhaps our spirituaitiy is or core issue.
I feel your poem was very sll written. I really love the last line
Well done, will
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Re: Inessential Man
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by blended76 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 07:23:13 AM AEST
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| Love the last two lines......Nicely written! |
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Re: Inessential Man
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by Frillycakes on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 06:58:23 AM AEST
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Great idea,
wonderful execution,
this is all that it should be
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