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Love-N-Pain
Contributed by
sride686
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Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 04:13:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Painfully devoted to a love that’s untrue
Perfect peace found in the one that loves you
Blind by pain and the hate that you hide
Lost to yourself in the maze of your mind
You touch your skin and you feel the pulse
Words of pain for you've lost your voice
You seek your freedom and mental peace
believing in crimson you will find your release
Searching for devotion and eternal truth
But find your peace in the grace of your youth
Rebuild a life that casts out the past
Your still breathing and your hearts on life’s path
Beauty and wisdom is your devotion
Graced and blessed sense life set in motion
Your heart is pure and vision is clear
Now grab hold of your strength and you'll persevere
~Steve~
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sride686
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2011-02-19 16:13:06]
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Re: Love-N-Pain
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by RachelSixx on
Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 05:11:15 PM AEST
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| very powerful, i love it! |
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Re: Love-N-Pain
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by emystar on
Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 10:36:17 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a realty deep, awesome write.
Great work.
Blessings, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Love-N-Pain
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 02:30:24 AM AEST
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| I really liked the last stanza. very inspirational. |
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Re: Love-N-Pain
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by huwbeauty on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 04:37:28 AM AEST
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| Awesome write, really enjoyed this one, so much depth in every verse, with an inspirational end. |
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