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Dreams Forsaken
Contributed by
sride686
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Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 04:08:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Dreams in the present
Dreams that have past
Dreams are fulfilled
Most dreams never last
Awakening now to inexplicable reality
Living fare from a dream come true
Dieing inside I'm lost in my mind
As I’m forced to dream about you
Selfishly dreaming of what can never be mine
Reaching through thoughts but its pain I find
Living with choices made and opportunities lost
Hurt in my heart as my mind starts to rot
I cant relinquish your memories from my mind
I'd cut out my eyes if it'd truly make me blind
But my thoughts are eternally fixed on you
Living with vision of what can never be true
The smell of your skin in my warm embrace
The look in your eyes as I caress your face
The kiss of your lips so forbidden and forsaken
A life worth living when I was yours for the taking
So from this day forth I'll continue to bleed
Crimson memories of a life meant for me
Forever lost in the thoughts of your warm embrace
Relentlessly dreaming to see your face
~Steve~
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sride686
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2011-02-19 16:08:05]
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Re: Dreams Forsaken
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by emystar on
Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 07:09:27 PM AEST
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Awesome writing here and I can relate.
good work.
blessings, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Dreams Forsaken
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by huwbeauty on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 04:46:01 AM AEST
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Nice write steve, I feel this, I feel your pain,
At least you don't have writers block anymore! |
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Re: Dreams Forsaken
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by ammar on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 10:49:57 AM AEST
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Enjoyed your poem.
'Selfishly dreaming of what can never be mine"
I find this line very powerful and very moving. I won't forget this one.
Peace
Ammar
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Re: Dreams Forsaken
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 01:44:42 PM AEST
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such a well written piece here. I can definitely relate.
my favorite part: "Living with choices made and opportunities lost"
take care
-K.Z. |
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