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Moon Walk.
Contributed by
cashfan1
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Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 01:09:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Tonight moon is walking on water.
Ignited by solitude it creeps across the lake
With delicate silky steps.
In the frosty burning distance
An owl measures the silence,
His chest puffed with soppy pride.
The air reverberates with his spine tingling call.
And all the while the night slowly matures,
Darkness meandering along path
And in wood, settling between the winter trees.
By ghostly stump and in secret hollow
The moon arrives with a giant golden smile,
Brushes away the stars and clouds,
Settles for simplicity,
Treading the water of the mountain lake.
Copyright ©
cashfan1
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2011-02-19 01:09:17]
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Re: Moon Walk.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 01:18:44 AM AEST
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Both excellent imagery and an imaginative story line. Once again, you paint a beautiful picture with your words and bring the galaxy to life in the reader's mind. Thank you. |
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Re: Moon Walk.
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by huwbeauty on
Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 03:30:41 AM AEST
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Beautiful,sheer brilliance,once again I find myself transported by your wonderful imagery.
Thanks.
Mat.
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Re: Moon Walk.
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by spud on
Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 07:05:18 AM AEST
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Hi Dennis,
Just brilliant, Dennis. Nature in all her wonder
owes you a great deal - you sell her beauty in
words of pure integrity!
Tommy
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Re: Moon Walk.
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by polaris773 on
Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 05:58:08 PM AEST
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| nice picture painted |
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Re: Moon Walk.
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by emystar on
Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 06:27:34 PM AEST
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I luv the beauty in this write.
I luv the full moon Too.
Blessings,
emy
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