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Inspiration
Contributed by
spud
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Friday, 18th February 2011 @ 01:25:53 PM in AEST
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I love the chime in rhyme and rhythm,
the pitch and roll that voices give them,
the ebb and flow of symphonism;
the muse ensemble.
I love the fresh inventive strain
where rare eureka moments reign,
and in a breath, all senses gain
exquisite joy.
In dancing words and sculptured phrases,
the ballet blanc - the chiselled graces,
and Art and Artistry embraces
.... and punctuates.
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spud
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2011-02-18 13:25:53]
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Re: Inspiration
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 12:01:13 AM AEST
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(((((((((( Tommy )))))))))) I love it! So perfectly perfect!  
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Re: Inspiration
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 12:17:43 AM AEST
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| Tommy back on the site in his unique eloquent style creating a perfectly crafted gem.I love the flow the gush of inspiration and then the finality of pen to paper encapsulated in that last line...... and punctuates......a pleasure as always Anna x |
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Re: Inspiration
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 05:48:08 AM AEST
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| Tommy!!! Welcome back my friend. You have made my day with this. Free flowing, great rhythm and easy on the mind rhyming. Can we look forward to some more from you? I hope so. |
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Re: Inspiration
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 01:54:58 PM AEST
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I am in awe...That is all :)
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Inspiration
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by Breezy on
Sunday, 7th August 2011 @ 07:22:26 AM AEST
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Magnificent! All crass comments aside, this was
exceptionally pleasing, Tommy. I have often thought
writers, ( poets especially so) must endure sacrifice
to spill forth emotive, glorious and profound writings.
Is this be true, then this piece is proof the rewards far
outweigh the sacrifices. Wonderfully written, my friend.
~ Breezy
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Re: Inspiration
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 13th October 2011 @ 09:54:43 PM AEST
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| I also enjoy rhyme and rhythm. :) What a great way to write. I enjoyed this one. |
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Re: Inspiration
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by Tracy on
Thursday, 19th January 2012 @ 08:28:14 AM AEST
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| I thought I would return the favor of reading and commenting. So glad I did. What a wonderful surprise. Loved, loved this. The rhythm, the rhyme, the meaning...everything fantastic. Could only be made better by hearing you read it aloud in your Scottish accent! Can't wait to read your other offerings. |
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