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broken picture
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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A picture of you and me I hold in my hand
Suddenly..... my mind stops
I stare at the image of your face
Teardrops run down from my eyes
The picture falls from my hand
glass is shattered on the floor
as I look at our picture
a piece of glass had torn through you
as I look closer I see blood circling the picture
I don't seem to know where the blood came from but it was dripping down from your face
then the phone rings
I heard what happened to you
I fall to the ground shattered in tears
I'm so shocked that you have died.
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2003-04-24 04:35:00]
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Re: broken picture
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 05:05:46 AM AEST
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Wow! This is really powerful. What a great poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: broken picture
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 10:48:26 AM AEST
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strong write a very good one
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Re: broken picture
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by springchic1979 on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:13:10 PM AEST
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Ooo! I could picture that perfectly as I read it. That sent a shiver down my spine. I loved it!
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Re: broken picture
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 07:59:31 PM AEST
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Wow put tears in my eyes very vivid, descriptive imagery I loved this.
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Re: broken picture
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by Sexygirl on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 12:25:44 PM AEST
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| This is wrtten so well...I could see the images you were portrayed here.... |
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