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Review Of My Obsession.

Contributed by CommasCanSeperate on Wednesday, 16th February 2011 @ 07:56:14 AM in AEST
Topic: obsession



This poem is about a poem I wrote. I realize how confusing it is. It's emotion, on a blank canvas. <3
I don't know where my own emotions lie other than in his arms. Therefore I blow upon dust and it all arises.


Only he can see you like this yet he can’t
For he withholds my sanity and keeps my calm.
He holds me closer and our heartbeats collide
Until my unfulfilled anger subsides
Muse in the background and anger bubbling below
It was going to be the perfect combination for another vile poem
Scream from each mountain that you want to marry me
That we will be bonded in holy matrimony
Tears tears more tears, that you’re not hear to collect
I wish I could have blood more blood, just to reflect.
I give up on this write, the anger has over taken me.
I’m breaking, I’m crumbling, can’t you see.
I’m hurting you again via my vile balled fists
Let go you fool, let go of this.






Copyright © CommasCanSeperate ... [ 2011-02-16 07:56:14]
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Re: Review Of My Obsession. (User Rating: 1 )
by Tomboy on Thursday, 17th February 2011 @ 11:34:19 AM AEST
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You have conveyed well the tangle of emotions you must be feeling. Please note spelling error (hear = here)




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