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Crying From Bar To Bar
Contributed by
Dirkj
on
Tuesday, 15th February 2011 @ 11:51:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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I Called you to meet me in the bar
I Have something in my pocket
I would like to share
As i go on bended knee
You stopped me
And said WAIT WAIT
There is something you should know
I Don't love you no more
I Started walking from
Town to Town
Bar to Bar
To find happiness
Being naked with
Every woman i can find
Never saw your face
In the background
Following me around
Till one day
In one bar
You said stop it
I'm Not gonna allow you
To cry in your pretzels anymore
You taught me so much
In so little time
To be patient
And wait for the right one
Let's have a drink
On those who have
Just found pure love
Copyright ©
Dirkj
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2011-02-15 23:51:14]
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Re: Crying From Bar To Bar
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by billc1970 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2011 @ 02:55:03 PM AEST
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Re: Crying From Bar To Bar
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by Sagefairy on
Wednesday, 16th February 2011 @ 04:16:15 PM AEST
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Good story. If someone gets naked with just anyone, either they or the anyone is bound to find heartache in most cases...
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