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Reassurance
Contributed by
The_unknown
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Tuesday, 15th February 2011 @ 09:29:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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I say good morning
You say have a good day
And we part our ways
Well I'd be lying if I said
I didn't give a damn
Because you know I do
You really have got to know I do
What I want?
What I want is for you to share
Share your soul, share your thoughts
Share your day, share your life
What I want is for you to give a damn
Because you know I do
Yes, I really do
I don't want to pry
No, I don't want this to be a struggle
Not for you and not for me
Just share a little more
And I'll be fine
Because I'm left here in the dark
Sitting, questioning, wondering
Thinking to myself
Do I really know her?
Even though I know I do
I say goodnight
You say sleep tight
I love you
I love you, too
And we fall asleep
Separately
Well I'd be lying if I said
I didn't give a damn
Because you know I do
I really, really do
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The_unknown
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Re: Reassurance
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by Tomboy on
Tuesday, 15th February 2011 @ 11:21:23 PM AEST
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| Reading this got me wondering how many times I and my loved ones use so many hackneyed words and phrases and never get down to really expressing our innermost feelings and the core of our being. Great! |
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Re: Reassurance
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 16th February 2011 @ 01:47:48 AM AEST
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I definitely feel ya on this one. I suppose some of the deepest thoughts/feelings are better left unexpressed...I've been doing that for a while, it hurts, but it's for the best, for me at least. Only the right time & judgment will bring things to light. I'm sure people do give a damn, but fear can do so much...
I really connected with your poem, it was just plain honest and heartfelt. That was the beauty of it...
take care
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Re: Reassurance
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by OnceAnAngel on
Saturday, 19th February 2011 @ 09:59:24 PM AEST
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| to know..sometimes we have to ask.. |
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Re: Reassurance
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by PoetMasterDani on
Saturday, 7th May 2011 @ 02:24:40 PM AEST
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| Wow. Touching. To truly know someone you have to ask. I have communication probs too and this got to me a little. |
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