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HATE
Contributed by
kittiekat
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Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
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"Hate"
I hate you.
Detest you.
I hate you with a passion.
A passion of pain and love.
Wanting to rip your heart out.
And letting it bleed.
I play with your heart.
And poke it with a needle.
So fine, so sharp.
The needle reflects the night.
Black and empty.
So cold and blind.
It's unseen.
How can you see this hatred?
With your distorted blind eyes.
Never seeing this hate I feel inside.
It's unseen.
Letting your heart drop on the ground.
It pours blood like a river flowing.
The needle still deep inside.
Poking, poking.
Copyright ©
kittiekat
... [
2003-04-24 03:05:00]
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Re: HATE
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:52:45 AM AEST
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Your hate is shown well in this poem,Welcome to YPDC!
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Re: HATE
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 04:04:55 PM AEST
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| im the writer of this poem, and what does ypdc mean? and thank you. >^..^< meow! |
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Re: HATE
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by kels497 on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 05:39:23 PM AEST
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Very emotional poem...interesting flow from image to image
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