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Misnavigated thoughts
Contributed by
StacyLynnG
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Tuesday, 15th February 2011 @ 12:15:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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I journey through misnavigated thoughts
Beyond my limits, I attempt to plot,
Memories are translusent and clarity fades.
Times spectacles turn gradual shades
Weaving a tangled web of what if and what now
I focus attention and begin to plow
Then expose the stars though transparent skys
And continue the voyage of my minds crossed eye.
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2011-02-15 00:15:23]
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Re: Misnavigated thoughts
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by Voyager on
Tuesday, 15th February 2011 @ 02:11:20 PM AEST
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I think you have a great gift of the abstract. Nice use of metaphors and descriptions.
Best line:
Memories are translusent and clarity fades |
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Re: Misnavigated thoughts
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 16th February 2011 @ 09:34:27 AM AEST
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I like the line:
"Weaving a tangled web of what if and what now"
A great poem about confusion and the mystery of life. |
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