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Where Darkness Shines

Contributed by mistersarang on Monday, 14th February 2011 @ 11:15:35 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Here I stand wondering if I’ll get somewhere with this life.In this darkness is there a way out
safe not hurt,will I ever learn to be what I'm, not what you want me to be. Do I have what it
takes to survive in this world? Do I have a heart or I'm i just like you, live just to die with
nothing left. I'm I a human or something out of our imagination. Can I handle this pain
killing me here this pain so deep, I’ll never get out what I call my black hole. Do people see
my pain can people see that I'm wearing a mask not to protect me but you. Can people see
that I'm dieing inside! That I'm screaming. Please wont you listen to this heart in pain?My
soul is numb. I'm I different not the same is that why I get this loneliness. My world call the
world of destruction. Do you dare to enter? You talk not listen, are you there. What people
hate is what I like. What keeps me going is knowing it’s alright. No! The truth is it’s not alright
I live in a world with lies & death. My oxygen is running low. Can't breathe! Is my blood
pumping? Did you leave me here to die? Please no more lies, no more cuts & stab to this
heart. Would you stop the bleeding. Matter of fact just leave the rest. Just stop beating the
heart. Stop controlling my mind. Please just leave. I can hold so much. I over did it.
Now I'm done.
Have I fail the test?

Copyright Â© mistersarang ... [ 2011-02-14 23:15:35]
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Re: Where Darkness Shines (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th February 2011 @ 09:32:36 AM AEST
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i like it.

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