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Evil on my chest
Contributed by
StacyLynnG
on
Monday, 14th February 2011 @ 12:35:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I lay in an involuntary state of sedation
My mind in a state of pure trepidation
Halucinations provide a horrific sensation
And bring on the fear of eternal damnation
A terror that strikes my core foundation
I lack faith but pray an echoed affirmation
For this demon guest's immediate eradication
Evil sits on my chest in a heavy formation
As breath evades me by pure domination
My pulse reaches a peak elevation
I struggle but my body lacks communication
I fight for life with a Soul desperation
And finally break free, a liberating stimulation
I bolt up in bed with panicky respiration
Sweat blankets my sheets in total saturation
I lay back down with reservation
awaiting the next myriad of unwanted visitation
Copyright ©
StacyLynnG
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2011-02-14 12:35:19]
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Re: Evil on my chest
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th February 2011 @ 05:00:29 PM AEST
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While I do not suffer from this as a "disease" I know the occasional feeling of it and you convey that feeling really good in this. Very nicely done.
Tim
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Re: Evil on my chest
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by ArkAngelGabriell on
Wednesday, 16th February 2011 @ 07:46:51 PM AEST
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Incredibly vivid picture running rampant in my head after reading this poem. Well written, extravagant flow, and overall a pleasure to read.
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Re: Evil on my chest
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by petulinka on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 05:39:43 AM AEST
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| also really liked the flow, somehow inspiring!!:) |
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Re: Evil on my chest
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by InfinitePoet on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 10:20:18 PM AEST
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WOW!!!! i couldn't even imagine having to deal with ***** like that night after night you poor thing!It took alot of courage to share that with everyone out here and i personally wanted to let you know you write well and th thank you so much 4 sharing!!
Respectfully,
Dana |
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