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Lines For the Night Sky
Contributed by
Breezy
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Sunday, 13th February 2011 @ 04:06:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
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~ * ~
You hold the depth of the radiance
as the graceful amenity of the stars
demands immersion
The velvet rolls through pools
of twinkling light
like a million tiny flickers of fire
and the world heaves with gentle infatuation
There is a calm that sweeps the Earth
which daytime blue is unacquainted with
Contentment lies in how you charm the soul
with your antiquated glitter
and command the moon, your goddess,
to bewitch hearts in their delicate slumber
inviting dreams to caress the allure of your visage
There is nothing more beguiling
than that of the night time sky,
where emotion can enslave
with the quiet illusion
of serenity ...
~ * ~
Copyright ©
Breezy
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2011-02-13 04:06:18]
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Re: Lines For the Night Sky
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th February 2011 @ 07:16:22 AM AEST
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Wow you certainly captured beauty in this write.
Happy, happy happy to see something from you. Missed ya
heavenly write,.
Big huggs,smiles, blessings,
luvu emy |
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Re: Lines For the Night Sky
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by The_Unknown on
Sunday, 13th February 2011 @ 08:55:04 AM AEST
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Amazing... You truly capture the beauty of night.
Thank you for sharing.
Tu |
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Re: Lines For the Night Sky
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by StacyLynnG on
Sunday, 13th February 2011 @ 09:12:36 AM AEST
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| That was lovely! And WOW |
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Re: Lines For the Night Sky
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 13th February 2011 @ 02:41:52 PM AEST
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| this is absolutely beautiful. i have missed you lately. |
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Re: Lines For the Night Sky
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th February 2011 @ 12:17:48 AM AEST
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You really really know how to write about the night sky. I remember reading about the night sky in another poem of yours (maybe two years ago?) and I can't even remember the words or anything else about it anymore except for the image it invoked in me ol' mind. That image came again to me tonight.
I love the way you paint with words.
Me |
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Re: Lines For the Night Sky
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by HERO on
Wednesday, 16th February 2011 @ 02:21:26 AM AEST
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| ....I feel like I wanna go lay in a field and look at the stars now. |
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Re: Lines For the Night Sky
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by Anoo on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2011 @ 08:21:00 AM AEST
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Beautifully serene. I can read it several times and still want to hear more. The poem has the effect of a lulluby.
Anoo |
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Re: Lines For the Night Sky
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by spud on
Monday, 8th August 2011 @ 07:47:22 AM AEST
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Hi Breezy,
Nature at its stunning best from the pen of a
Poet at her stunning best!
Tommy
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Re: Lines For the Night Sky
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by doug on
Thursday, 19th April 2012 @ 08:09:48 AM AEST
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| I've always enjoyed the night more than day. Except for days with clouds the sunny sky always feels to empty. The night is wonderful and cool and full of stars. You have invoked the essence of this which is no small feat. I will be sure to step out tonight and enjoy some of that serenity only the night can bring. Great writing as always. truly , Doug |
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Re: Lines For the Night Sky
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 10:13:43 AM AEST
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Your poetic lines could light up the night sky! This is radiant. You always paint such robust imagery.
Love this line:
and the world heaves with gentle infatuation
Oh yeah. That's the stuff!!
~Scorp |
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