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Narrow Eyes
Contributed by
StacyLynnG
on
Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 10:11:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Its typical,
With narrow eyes and a closed mind, your peripheral
does not exist.
Persist with a Repugnant perception that clogs your pores.
Now to those not living in folklore,
It has become our chore,
Into their heads we shall bore,
To the accute,
To the minute comprehension
of those yearning for ascension,
Pay attention.
Whether one is homosexual,
bisexual, trisexual,
a cross dresser or a transgender
To themselves they surrender, no longer the pretender.
Their hearts, ever so tender.
In part, due to the offender.
And it is to you we render.
The "choice" wasn't theirs to make and yet you forsake.
Discourage, dissuade.
"If you turn to God, you will be saved!"
Now for a proposition, our exposition,
Lose the verbal ammunition
It is time for abolition
Equal rights needs NO permission,
So with them I sypathize
I advise, and reiterize
To harmonize we need to synchronize
and mobilize with open eyes
Its typical,
With narrow eyes and a closed mind, your peripheral
does not exist.
Copyright ©
StacyLynnG
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2011-02-12 22:11:53]
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Re: Narrow Eyes
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by nikki13 on
Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 11:00:18 PM AEST
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| very good :) |
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Re: Narrow Eyes
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by Aspirant on
Sunday, 13th February 2011 @ 04:01:58 AM AEST
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| Well written. The argument seems too emotional though, made it unconvincing to me. |
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Re: Narrow Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th January 2012 @ 10:27:12 AM AEST
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Nice beat,  great message!!!
I am sure I could talk on this subject all day/night long but I'll just leave it at this:
People pick and choose what they need to fit their beliefs from the Bible. If someone says they think you'll be saved just by asking Jesus, they forget that Jesus hung with some questionable people and also said, "Judge not and ye shall not be judged". Don't get me wrong, Jesus rocks...just sayin' that there are people that only see what they wanna see and that includes their Bible references.
Nice write,
Thanks,
Tim
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