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I wish you still thought of me
Contributed by
longago
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Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 06:04:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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youasked me why
i asked myself the same
i thought we'd genuinely last forever
i know there's only me who is to blame
i would have given all i had for you
and even now i know id give it all
to have the chance to take back my mistake
taht caused out perfect paradise to fall
i never know that i could be so cruel
with something that i thought id never do
i still have no idea how it happened
how did i let it happen..i loved you
and two years on i still ask myself how
how i pushed and hurt and let you go
now you've moved on and i have been forgotten
a pleasure that i doubt ill ever know
i miss you i miss us and i miss me
ive torn myself apart i cant forgive
im sorry im so sorry that it happened
i can't remember how it feels to live
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Re: I wish you still thought of me
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by nikki13 on
Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 11:11:06 PM AEST
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| i can really relate to this poem. its really good i felt as if it was for me. not long a go a poem kinda like this was sent to me from my ex. but it was longer about 10 pages. good job |
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Re: I wish you still thought of me
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 13th February 2011 @ 11:27:40 AM AEST
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| Move on, and next time, don't make the same mistake. Its harsh I know, but reality is not always kind. you will find love again. |
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Re: I wish you still thought of me
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 13th February 2011 @ 03:35:31 PM AEST
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its rough..but you'll get through. my favorite lines in this were:" i still have no idea how it happened
how did i let it happen..i loved you"
these lines are so emotional, and true..they made me sigh.. |
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