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metal heart
Contributed by
jaimee
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Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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maybe it's the way i say "i love you"?
i give you my end.
my only hope and one desire.
i give you my sin.
my kill-me rope and hate-like fire.
i always knew i'd be alone,
but never understood
the consequences of an isolation
this deep.
this final.
your silent betrayal was not the cause.
you constantly desirable,
unearthly demon beauty
will kill me in the end.
forever useless, self-destructive hope,
my every dream belongs to you,
my every waking moment,
myt ever tortured sleep,
i give it all to you.
the sweetest moment
was the single second that you loved me.
the single second that i loved myself.
one last time, i wanna feel alive.
my excitement at your overwhelming radiance
will have to suffice.
Copyright ©
jaimee
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2003-04-23 23:35:00]
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Re: metal heart
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by shelby on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 12:47:13 AM AEST
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intense write well done.
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Re: metal heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 10:10:33 AM AEST
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Wow! This is really intense and really moving. Excellant writing style.
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