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Red Wine Stains On The Carpet
Contributed by
Dirkj
on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 11:32:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Every picture tells a story
In that room
Dragon eyes guards over it
The cracks in the walls
Filled with our tears
Cracks only we have caused
Your naked body
Rides my future
Like a ghostly figure
From some forgotten movie
Red wine stains on the carpet
Torn shirts hanging in the cupboard
Should have realised love has lost
When lust was the only actor
In my mind i see the sofa
Stains of our sins
Cemented
The cloth will never dry
All our actions
Done in a drunken state
Never sober
We felt so hopeless
With a bottle of wine between us
Why is lusting after you such a sin
When all i ever wanted to do was to love you
You were born to make me happy
I Was born to make you sweat
But we both knew
It would never be
Life is just like that
Copyright ©
Dirkj
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2011-02-10 23:32:02]
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Re: Red Wine Stains On The Carpet
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 12:31:21 AM AEST
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| nice poem :P |
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Re: Red Wine Stains On The Carpet
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 06:57:13 AM AEST
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| Good write I loved it!!! |
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Re: Red Wine Stains On The Carpet
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by poeticjestix on
Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 12:03:58 AM AEST
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| Been there, done that. Love feels better than lust. Booze confuses the two but leaves you feeling guilty. Very well written |
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