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Webs
Contributed by
LizzyC
on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 04:20:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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As I wander through,
the hall,
people laugh,
and stare.
like I am a,
clown,
I ask someone,
they ignore me,
I know now,
they know,
my secret.
It is linking,
to one another,
like a spiders web,
glistening and waiting,
for another.
Copyright ©
LizzyC
... [
2011-02-10 16:20:30]
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Re: Webs
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by Tomboy on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 06:36:20 PM AEST
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| very good job on tieing your self in the web |
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Re: Webs
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 09:11:57 PM AEST
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| Man I hate gossip. People have nothing better to do than create fallacies about others in order to look better than them? As for the poem, I'm not feeling it too much. Too be honest it's not that the poem is bad, it's just a topic I don't relate to or enjoy, so maybe it stems from that. |
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Re: Webs
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 04:20:58 PM AEST
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people are pathetic sometimes. Always the never ending struggle for power. Whether it be a rumor, being critical, racism, etc...
It's all a battle for power. |
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