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I had it all
Contributed by
Alphas0z
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Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 06:31:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I had it all,
And now its gone,
All of it,
Even my life.
Remembered the day,
When we smiled together,
You were like the sunshines ray,
And now I'm twisting in nether.
My love,
I begged you to come back,
Yet you did not,
I miss you my love.
My heart is empty,
My mind is blank,
I'm neither conscious or unconscious,
I'm neither dead nor alive.
I died inside,
Yet live outside,
Waiting for you,
Wandering the earth.
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Alphas0z
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2011-02-10 06:31:46]
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Re: I had it all
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by Jenn2004 on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 12:47:04 PM AEST
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| I feel the same way too! |
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Re: I had it all
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by poeticjestix on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 02:52:44 PM AEST
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Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.
Happens to everyone
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Re: I had it all
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by Dirkj on
Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 02:59:05 AM AEST
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| it happens to most of us, you keep your head high it will look better soon, nice poem |
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Re: I had it all
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 04:26:14 PM AEST
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| Anger is a most useful tool in this situation. Use your sadness to fuel your anger, and use your anger to become a stronger person and fight the pain. Never give in to pain. |
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Re: I had it all
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by Banjosandwitch on
Thursday, 17th February 2011 @ 05:40:53 AM AEST
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| join the club lol |
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