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The tide
Contributed by
cssdman
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Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 12:41:42 PM in AEST
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When it comes in it fills all the small places and with it comes life, but when it recedes there is nothing but emptiness and longing. A dying of the life that has taken root. But then the tide returns and with it hope. Hope that it will remain, hope that the life that is being clinged to will remain, will hold. But the tide leaves again and with it life and hope and in its place, doubt and loneliness to add to the emptiness and longing. The tide flows in and out without seeing what it is doing, not cold or uncaring, but just in motion. Unaware of its effects or the hurt it is bringing when it leaves. You are the tide and the bringer of love and hope, but also of pain and loneliness. I die a little more each day the tides of your love receded.
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Re: The tide
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by nikki13 on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 09:52:10 PM AEST
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Re: The tide
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 04:32:34 PM AEST
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| If it isn't over, you still have a chance, bring the tide back, before it is too late. Play hard or go home. |
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Re: The tide
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by InfinitePoet on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 10:33:31 PM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL!!!! Bravo!!
Keep writing and sharing Always
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Dana |
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