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Just Someone To Hold

Contributed by 2bpositive on Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 09:59:27 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Someone to hold, is that not really your true desire
seeing the title of this poem, you came to inquire
subconsciously you need to have, an outlet to deal
emptiness confines you, refusing to accept it's real

Closing your eyes, and trying to do your very best
hoping to get a handle, on the level of your stress
but your attempts fail, forcing you to admit defeat
loneliness and depression, pounding your heartbeat

You speak with your friend, in whom you trust
seeing you're desperate, she's coming she must
not a half hour passes, standing now by your side
your crying to her your woes, with nothing to hide

Your chance for true love, how you felt it so close
naivety and desperation, you took a double dose
now he is gone, these days seem to pass as years
a heart so crushed, yielding her flow of wet tears

What you are left with, a pain so endlessly deep
there is no escape, but counting sheep in your sleep
while you paid a price that was ever so steep
realizing your only friend is the hope you keep

Tomorrow will yet burn with a special, warm light
new hope will bring with it a chance to make right
happiness will yet reign, banning sadness out of sight
that someone special, forever to hold you tight

A loving look, accompanying that warm embrace
a way into his heart, finally finding your true place
bound with a oneness that only loving hearts could feel
no longer asking, because you know, you just know it's real

Copyright © 2bpositive ... [ 2011-02-09 09:59:27]
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Re: Just Someone To Hold (User Rating: 1 )
by CommasCanSeperate on Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 12:14:40 PM AEST
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I have someone to hold. I feel so special... Beautiful write x x

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