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Visualizing
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 09:33:56 PM in AEST
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My eyes are closed;
yet I can see.
Visions of happiness float in my cloudy mind.
On one fluffy cloud I lean back and embrace my love.
I can feel his strong arms warming my body and soul.
Another cloud floats in my mind;
On it is a childhood memory.
I sled down a hill on a Dadmade sled.
My eyes are closed;
yet I see.
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Re: Visualizing
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dirkj on
Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 12:32:08 AM AEST
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| well written , very enjoyable read , well done |
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Re: Visualizing
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 03:09:57 AM AEST
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| Can breathe this one Heidi,wonderfully dreamy but with undertones of strength and support adding a lovely warmth and depth of feeling. |
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Re: Visualizing
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by Tomboy on
Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 06:15:51 AM AEST
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Hi
very well done, love how you blened
seeing things,when eyes are closed
well done |
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