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death negotiating
Contributed by
elle
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Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 10:58:26 AM in AEST
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insufficient quiver. . .
you ate away my struggling
& nuances of hurt
of hope
withering beneath your feasting
I wanted. . .
just. . . to peel away
that membrane
where you set bloom
or mist my sleep
to cease the deep
& dark cupboarding of gloom
my face, concave
flesh gave away
the tone & verve
the essence & the vigor
gave up the ghost
I felt morose
but still. . .
death did deliver
Copyright ©
elle
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2011-02-08 10:58:26]
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Re: death negotiating
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 01:51:51 PM AEST
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| Very deep and very strong. Well written in a smooth readable style. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: death negotiating
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by Breezy on
Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 05:12:27 PM AEST
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Oh elle..... unbelievably intense. And passionate. That last line
is so wonderfully juicy, I could taste it....
Amazing, as your work most certainly always is. I adore this.
Right from the first delicious line to the last.
~ Breezy
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Re: death negotiating
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 08:46:00 PM AEST
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On a side note (I know, I know, I'm typing it first) death did negotiated with Dean on Super Natural. 
Damn this is sad. I don't handle death well and this definitely brings that feeling with it...this this awesome write of yours. And actually? The power of your writing does convey images of horror in me ol' cranium.
Phew, another great from Elle. |
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Re: death negotiating
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by Spike on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 04:38:46 AM AEST
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yep - one of the true certainties. we should teach that one earlier to the kiddies. Can we negotiate? maybe the method, if we are lucky, but never, never the outcome.
S. |
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Re: death negotiating
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 05:16:18 PM AEST
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this poem is to die for..haha. i had to.
but really, i love this peice..even if i could negotiate the outcome, i don't think i would want to, i've already had enough of the live version and i'm only 25..lol. |
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Re: death negotiating
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by xnickix7 on
Monday, 14th March 2011 @ 08:57:59 PM AEST
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| GREAT piece. "my face, concave flesh gave away". I love this line :) great job! |
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