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THE BEAUTY OF A FLOWER
Contributed by
Tomboy
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Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 01:56:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Ever see the lovely flower and see how it grows?
See the bright colors, smell its fragrance.
It twirls round and round without any care.
The wind blows its petals and stem
with a rush of enjoyment,
as though it’s happy, gay and carefree.
See its beauty. Look, see how it shines.
The reflection of the sun’s rays vibrates
into a hypnotizing effect on the eyes.
Look, see, touch, enjoy the essence of beauty.
You see it as you make your travels through life.
There! Over there!
Look! See!
It’s in abundance, just for the picking.
It’s yours.
Mother Nature and the Good Lord made it for you.
It’s amazing,
that beautiful flower!
Copyright ©
Tomboy
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2011-02-06 13:56:56]
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Re: THE BEAUTY OF A FLOWER
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by iodinelove on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 04:00:30 PM AEST
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Are you getting Medical Marijuana by any chance?
Only Joking. I'm ok with being positive, but I think it is better to see that the flaw in the flower is what makes it beautiful. Perfection is terrifying. Trust me. |
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Re: THE BEAUTY OF A FLOWER
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 05:34:47 PM AEST
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I really like the feel of this poem. Not only is it about nature, it has a natural feel to it. Specifically, I like the way it "speaks" to the reader with a natural excitement, poetic verse / natural conversation with someone.
Job well done.
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: THE BEAUTY OF A FLOWER
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by Banjosandwitch on
Monday, 7th February 2011 @ 06:51:39 AM AEST
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| nice flowers rock i love taking pictures of them and puting my poetry over the images makes a greart gift |
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