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White Sails
Contributed by
Evanescencefreak
on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 05:03:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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I lie in the trench
Bodies all around
Hardly feeling, barely breathing
The shells continue to pound
I lie in the trench
And think of the past
Of my family and friends
Wish that future would last
I lie in the trench
And listen to rain
Maybe it's bullets
Don't know, they're both the same
I lie in the trench
And listen to death
I slowly grow numb
And draw my last breath
I lie in the trench
and fade slowly away
I don't hold on
I don't want to stay
I lie in the trench
My body fails
I float far away
On a boat with WHITE SAILS
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Evanescencefreak
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2011-02-06 05:03:43]
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Re: White Sails
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by thebadguy9999 on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 07:58:32 AM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: White Sails
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 08:36:13 AM AEST
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| You are pretty good with the rhyming...and nice poem!! |
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Re: White Sails
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by Tomboy on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 09:45:12 AM AEST
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Really enjoyed your poem
i can really get involved in it
You Put lots of thought inot it
Good work |
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Re: White Sails
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by huwbeauty on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 11:03:57 AM AEST
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| This is a truly fantastic write, it really paints a picture of the horror that was WW1.How many suffered this fate? |
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Re: White Sails
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by AdamH on
Tuesday, 15th November 2011 @ 06:55:40 AM AEST
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| I like this. The last stanza is lovely. |
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