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In The Same Place
Contributed by
Xnoybis
on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 04:33:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Why bother?
All of my efforts
have lead me to this place
Where I'm so bored
and alone
I could resurface
To say hello
But I can't change
my stripes
I could muster the effort
To give you a hug
and make you feel better
but where would that leave me?
In the same place
All of my efforts
Have lead me to this place
where I'm so bored
and alone
I could follow the template
left behind by most that came before
but where would that leave me?
In the same place
I've kept an eye open for you
All this time
Only to find myself
In the same place
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Re: In The Same Place
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by thebadguy9999 on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 08:13:02 AM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: In The Same Place
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 08:38:23 AM AEST
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| Yeah sometimes you have to ask yourself the question why bother? Good poem.!!! |
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Re: In The Same Place
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by Spike on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 04:34:13 AM AEST
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very lyrical, and yes, what's the point sometimes, if all our actions leave us where we were. well written.
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